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Reviews for "Idiot Stick Shorts #1"

Good

You had alot of strong points and some annoyances. One of such annoyances was you mispelt numerous words do I'd go back into the flash movie and reread the stuff you wrote. Also when you are doing the morale of each story don't stop the music, rather fade the music to a less volume so that the reader has something to listen to while reading. Also you might want to have the talk bubbles the traditional white background so that people can read what the people are saying without focusing to hard on the screen.

swaenK responds:

Thanks for your constructive review. Yeah there is a lot of little things I could probably fix. I had the speech bubble problem pointed out to me in movie screenings, but I was too lazy to fix it :/. The music was cut out because of size, I couldn't run fade without actualy editing my self. Once again lazy-ness took a roll in that issue. Once again thank you for your review.

Work in progress

Hey with a little tweaking and some more idiots, you might be on to a great stick film. The morals were funny.

swaenK responds:

Thanks, the morals were fun to write! :D

ok sure it was some what funny

the ski-free monster I have played that crappy game in years it brings back memorys lol.

swaenK responds:

Yeah, good ol windows 95 eh?

Cant go wrong with Sticks

The Ski-Free Monsters the bomb. Right there you get points!

swaenK responds:

Yeah lol, he was a nuisance back in the day, I am amazed I don't see him in more movies.

Lmao ski monster!!!

I remeber that ski monster i used to play that game. That's big time old school i used to make the dog piss then try to dodge the snow monster. I think i did only once but in 2 secs he came back and killed me lol! Awesome man keep up the good work

swaenK responds:

Thanks for your review. Yeah, he was a bitch, I use to speed it up real fast and see how long I could stay in the air.