Good
You had alot of strong points and some annoyances. One of such annoyances was you mispelt numerous words do I'd go back into the flash movie and reread the stuff you wrote. Also when you are doing the morale of each story don't stop the music, rather fade the music to a less volume so that the reader has something to listen to while reading. Also you might want to have the talk bubbles the traditional white background so that people can read what the people are saying without focusing to hard on the screen.