Short but somehow sour...
First this needs something to add suspense... even if it is close to/is the original you need to do something about it... also extend it! 11 seconds of loop is too short! this does not work well with that! maybe 30 seconds or so but 11 is too short. this is missing quite a few elements and needs that extra "UMPH". put a little work into this. it could be so much better. please note that this is just constructive criticism. I'm just trying to help! :3