Quite an excellent movie to see over brunch!
Pretty good flash! It is rather short and to the point, a trait lacking in alot of flash movies. Many a good joke get ruined by draging the movie out to long. Kudos to you.
Now for the critisims... Your drawing ability is rather high in flash, but your style seems to fluctuate. The quality and style of the people in the movie are notably different from the zombies. This was most appaent in the "date"(by the way, great stuff that) You may think about trying to match the drawing styles a bit more. Also, to avoid those crackly/puffy sound clips, try taking several recordings of your lines and pick the best one. It sounds like the people recording the voices were too close to the mike and breathed into it.
Well, keep it up! I love the Noir(black and white) style you use, gives the submission a very different feel.