ninja scroll . . .
Nice animation, I think u spent a very good amount of time, though you could tell some parts were traced from ninja scroll, of course you're not going to admit it, etc. but i still think it was a good animation, the voice overs were great, hope to see part 3, maybe it won't have too much rotoscoping
nice
voice actin was alright, animation was great. didnt like the textures that were used for the ground etc and the gradients that were sometimes used. woulda preferred if it was all solid colours like the characters. oh and i really didnt like the pure white mouth when they were talking.... wouldnt black be better? other than that.. excellent
Visually stunning, but...
... you need to work on your storytelling abilities. By this, I mean that, while your charactrs are working properly and everything, the flow of this is really shaky; characters pop up of whose affiliation/purpose we are unclear, there are way too many close ups to understand the action half the time, and so forth.
I think, if you work on your storyboarding and pre production more, try getting some establishing shots thrown in there, and smooth out the pacing a little better, this would be much more successful.
Thank you for your critique. It was manny critique like yours that resulted in much improved follow up to Legacy episode 1. I will take what you've said in future episodes. Again, I thank you.
Damn...
It's bad that you traced alot of stuff..Like, Samurai X, and Ninja Scroll..I think you should stop the tracing and more stuff from your head..I give it a 7..I was kinda disapointed after watching it because of tracing..It's still good tho...
((( WOW )))
Wow this was awosme, what can you say about this flash that has not already, very well made, with tons of effort and talent its amazing and im glad i had a chance to check it out awsome work cant wait for more...
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