Long review!!!
I love your choice of music for this. Although, the song seems much more melancholy than the actual message of the movie. But it still fit. I have to say, the drawing styles used in your other movies would have fit better than the cartoony one you used here, but maybe this is an earlier animation (pre wacom, maybe?) I enjoyed the movie if nothing else because once again, it's good to see artistic, thoughtful animation once in a while, and I like the whole slice of life thing. I think, however, that the viewer might have identified more with the story and the two lovers if some visual info had been given to make them stand out as unique individuals (not just random, nameless, tragic boy and girl.) I can't say I could tell you how to do that; maybe some other brief scene showing a detail of their life together that wasn't so bland. I'm sorry, I hope it doesn't sound like I'm just being mean; I'm just an overly critical person;) And long winded too! Just my honest opinion; but I really did enjoy it, and I hope to see more animations from you soon.