OMFG!
this was magnificant! only adjust the language a bit, yes, i look after details a lot, one of the guys said nothing in that language the other one said that too but with a different word, please, just for my sake keep an eye out for that, but for the rest: THUMBS UP!
amazing
that was really good, all though i don't think they were speaking a lanugauge known to man i still liked it
okay
This is pretty good. However, I would've liked more backstory and maybe some info about the world you've created. One thing that I did not like was that it made no sense for the guy to spare him. Why would he do that when he told him that he was going to kill him and he had no apparent reason for sparing him considering that they did not know each other.
i favour you :P
yay yay yay everyone loves fox keep it up!
Lookin GOOOOOD!
I really liked it! Very DBZish, but with an almost "medieval" theme to it. I especially liked the music too! ;) Looking forward to the next one!