Great remix!
I dont know the song you remixed ^^' But it sounds goooood!!! I have to admit it does sound repetitive, but overall you did a good job, mastering is good as always, but you could work more on your songs before releasing them (even to NG) I took a month finishing my song Rainforest hehe ^^'
So ye, the more u work on your songs, the better ; )
Peace bro!