bravo
it fits perfectly!!!
Reviews for "Mars Conspiracy (Chptr06)"
i never vote
great blah blah blah, but if its in spanish shouldn't it not say loading... on his phone thingy?
excellent
very good, the story is going pretty smoothly and there is just enought action. But, what the hell was that robot-double-minigun-flying thing. it looked a lot more developed than the human technology.
Wow I love this story
This is really an amazing story line. I'm happy I decided to read it regardless of the language and subtitles.
Nice Work
I can't believe my eyes was this chapter shorter than the others???????? Any way this chapter had a lot of suspense will everything going on. I really liked that this chapter had moremovment of your characters. I liked the detial you put on the machine that the girl had. I fill a little love about to go down I guess I'll have to watch the seventh chapter to find out. The part about the cuffs discharging was very creative, I like that. To chapter seven yeah.