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I hope not to make a long review, but I probably will. First of all, the beginning is extremely crowded and muddy. Filter that reese. Bandpass it. Sweep the bandpass around. Mess with patterns. Don't just leave it there to muddy up the drums.
Har har, still using my breaks.... I've made much better now. Still, sounds alright. Kinda reminds me of Current Value... Man, that reese is all over the place. Really, tighten it up. ParagonX9 isn't dnb. Reeses aren't melodic. Pitchbend, filter, fucking mess with it. Don't make melodies... That just makes it sound like trance with breakbeats pitched down. Srsly, if you don't process reeses, they can be extremely similar in different octaves.
The drums here have more flow than the others, but still the excessive use of the snare drum. I really should give this a try. This song was alright. Not your best, by any means.