sry for the 7 but
It was just to short
Reviews for "Dinosaur Jr. ep.00"
JacklandStudios responds:
This was just a little thing I made some time ago, I'm preparing right now the series, with redesigned characters, a whole script and all
Glad you liked, tough :)
-J
Not bad, but...
...music was to repetitive;
2)there was no sounds at all (walking, hiting birds etc.);
3)poor plot;
4)static backgrounds (you should made wind, moving clouds, flying birds etc.
5)disproportions (dino is the same like tree in one frame and in other tree is much bigger)
6)some logic mistakes also
Else - quite good. Keep it up. !
JacklandStudios responds:
This was really an oldie toon I made when I barely knew how to use flash (it was done after wth men ep.2, I think), to be honest I'm amazed it passed judgment!.
But thanks for the support tough :)
-J
P.S. I really like your cartoons
Poor birds...
Funny stuff! Not great, but a solid start. Better than I could do.
JacklandStudios responds:
Thanks, but if you try really hard I bet you could beat this toon, anyone can! (I already did, because this was made like 10 months ago)
-J
Went really nowhere
needs work.
JacklandStudios responds:
I know, it's an oldie :)
cool
a rather short quickie you got here, but it was still pretty good. you could even give this character his own little mini-series of something. i think that would be cool.
JacklandStudios responds:
That's the idea
Thanks for the review :)
-J