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Reviews for "The One You Really Love"

Good. But leaves you to question.

-Saw that we made a little mistake in compiling the list when you posted. Thought it would be only right to review it first so I don't miss it personally. I don't see too many of these comic strip art pieces but that's probably because I barely frequent the art portal that much anymore. Maybe i'll find a spark by reviewing some art.

-I like how it's overly dramatic but makes sense and could actually happen. A nice bit of storytelling with not too much in the form of words. Not exactly sure why they are running. Maybe it could of been fit into the police officer's dialogue somewhere. The progression of the story leads to an almost fitting comedic relief and makes the officer become perplexed in the background. Will he let them go or will he continue with his duty?

-I like how you have a stereotypical tomboy/pretty girl combination in the lesbian lovers. It makes it all too clear why the tomboy tries to be the tough one but ends up failing. Gritty hard working cop who is in the way and the pretty one who is stuck in the fray. A little confused by the dark eyes as they work for the cop and the tomboy but not the redhead. It just makes her look a little wierd. Maybe there is a reason for that though.

-Location is well suited. Dark and forlorn. Rather secluded area for the standoff to happen. Isn't too fancy to let you know exactly where they are but gives you enough to infer for yourself. I also like how you blocked off each picture into a different shape or size of rectangle. Overall it's a rather good comic strip but it left me with those few questions.

-Review Request Club

Aigis responds:

In the original script I actually had a reason stated for the cop chasing after them, but decided that it wasn't necessary in the end. I quite enjoy telling stories with as few words as possible.

The One She Loves Is Weak

This was extremely out of the ordinary... I think that's why I liked it as much as I did. The style of the faces is what strikes me the most about your artistic style. The darkness in place of eyes is obviously the result of either inability to draw eyes or a kind of 'dark' style.

It certainly took me by surprise that the girl (I guess it was supposed to be a girl ? ) was unable to at least bother the man with the punch, but maybe if I had been following the series it would make more sense. Overall you are a good artist, and I see you have good attention to detail, but I had one small issue.

In the last frame, the man in the background probably could've been drawn the same as your other characters. This is just a matter of personal taste, as I know many artists who do the same, I just absolutely hate stick-like figures.

Other than that, this was absolutely great. I look forward to seeing more from you.

-Review Request Club-

awsome.

i was expecting something completly random to happen, but the punch attempt was funny. also why do i feel reminded by the song Breakin the law.