tons of emotion here
I like the overall feel, it goes right along with the story outline you provided. The only thing I could think of that I would've liked better, would be an occasional roll or two in the snare. I play percussion in college and the snare is so much more versatile than it was used here. The beat is great and driving, just an occasional long roll would've been cool :-)
Very dramatic piece you have here. Thanks for sharing.
Allie