Not bad, not bad...
I gave you a 4. I liked the scene where the black atom originally gets punched - very nice blood effects there. However, the following fight was a bit shitty.
Most of it was tweening, but you did it very well. The scenery was well created and there was just enough going on on the screen for it to be interesting rather than confusing.
1.84 for this movie's score is a little low. You did a good job, and I'll look out for the rest.
Thank you. I haven't been taught flash by anyone or anything, so I plan to pick up some techniques from other sites, perhaps. Anyway the score of 1.84 is low. Must be people just randomly voting low.
Nerd!!
I liked how your characters were molecules and an atom, but is there really a carbon-00? Good on the humor aspect, storyline sub-par, liked the Dragonball-type blast there at the end
:P I'm guessing you called me a nerd because I used atoms for the storyline. Actually, creating this flash movie help me study a bit, too. Haha. There is no Carbon-00. The numbers will be explained soon enough!
sorry about the low score
Sorry about the low score but still u are doin good people can learn from this lol even though h20 is post to kick carbons ass like nothin but eh o well.Its realy fun to wacth somethin like this if i was u make the grapics good and maybe u'll become a great flash movie artist.
I have already taken up 3D graphics and, if I get good enough, I will put a bit on the next few episodes.
Writing as I watch the movie:
And... Go. Liking the music.. Wha? Reading? Like I can read? Ok, ok... let's see... Hey, I wasn't done! Dude, too much story, man.. You should introduce it a different way, and make it easier to understand. Also, work on your grammar. Spelling's not horrible, yet. This is pretty boring. For a fight scene, nothing really cool happening. Nice effects there, but still boring. It looks nice, but that's about it. Work on it... Hope episode 2 makes more sense.
I will try harder on the second one. I only try to improve. I'll also make longer fighting scenes and more elaborate storylines using actual characters instead of just text.
Eh it was ok.
You need to work on the skipping in the music. Also the characters are just circles...nothing too interesting there man.