Hmm
Yeah, well it was good, the fight scenes were quite good, slightly long winded, the house was good but i was kinda expecting them to run to him and the bit that happened at the end, new and un-expected, admirable. As for black ninja, pretty good, but id make a main enemy for him to be chasing or somthing. Oh and if i were you, get rid of the goofy "play again"/ writing looks out of place, and try and refine and tidy up the shape of the characters a bit. overall not bad hope this "constructuve critisism" helps.