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Reviews for "Cap'n's Cap n' Coat"

Ah what the hell?

It may look like Captain Syrup to me but if you call her Bonnie then she's Bonnie! Hahahaha no seriously I love her outfit in this really suits her character. In fact now she looks like Ruby Heart from Marvel vs Capcom 2 naaaah Im just teasing really good stuff here keep it coming!

maniac086 responds:

haha! Thank you very much!

Excellent.

Now that's a captain I wouldn't mind serving under! But I would have to agree with pbillybilly on her elbows, although it may be because of the baggy tunic she's wearing that makes them look like that. And, its either just me, or there's something off about her kneecaps. Can't quite put my finger on it, but maybe its the pose she's in, or she's slightly pigeon-toed.

Good work nonetheless!

maniac086 responds:

Thanks much!
Addressed the elbows a few posts ago, now the knees... haha!
Pretty much, yeah, she's standing pigeon-toed. =D Her whole stance is supposed to comically fall just shy of being imposing. For subtext, her actions speak louder than her posture. =)

nice

haha, I have a poster for this series on my wall. Looks good, nice shading, slightly odd pose but everything else is great

maniac086 responds:

Thank ya much! Glad you like the poster too!

Pose

Good technicals on everything except pose. Her elbows seem to be thrust forward too far, resulting in (, at least, for me,) the arms looking backwards. I might just be missing something though.

maniac086 responds:

Thanks much!
It's probably just the oversized sleeves. As for the arms themselves, I referenced myself doing the pose with my elbows flared as far out as I could while still feeling casual. It's not the most conventional pose, but it works for Bonnie's quirkily heroic persona, and it roughly works anatomically as well.
I worked it until I was satisfied that it looked natural enough for a static shot. =)

argg there she blows

nice

maniac086 responds:

Thanks!