Hm
I see your point, but not very insightful. The music mixed with the high speed image flashing was cool, but not impactful enough to carry the entire clip.
Reviews for "Discordance"
Good but....
I don't understand the use of the Ying Yang symbol, its off beat and doesn't fit. You were using western symbols created by a western government that is way more technologically advanced then the east, which makes the symbol seem old and inappropriate in your techno overload war theme. Also the bad drawing of the two people fighting drew attention away from the main point which I'm guessing is your expression of War or everything that is bad today expressed in these modern symbols. Also the music was too loud at the start.
I agree with cdcon
War is inevitable. I know war is a horrible thing....but I dare you to try to find a time in which this world was completely peaceful. You can't. Because the human race is rather stupid sometimes.
Anyho about the movie:
It was ok. Just try something else. It has a weird feeling that it has been done befor (especially with the "OBEY" crap).
Well...you tried.... 3/5
cool
not bad, don't see too many of flashes like this, i encourage you and other people to try and make some movie's like this.
another artsy anti-war film
we don't need more random social commentary in the world.
you have potential though, so try an frame your message in an original manner. this stuff has been done way too many times before to be effective.