I'm sorry
It's beautiful. I loved the artwork. It pained me to give it a three instead of a five. But it is in need of a text translation. From what I could tell, knowing what the dialog was would have made it insanely better. I really hope this makes it into the portal, but since most Newgrounds users are Americans (myself included), I wouldn't be surprised if this comes in with a low score or gets blammed. I am seriously looking forward to a translated version though.