nice i really liked it
the one thing i didnt like though was the voice it was hard to listen to with music as well
Reviews for "Red City Part 1"
Well done, but a few suggestions, if I may
Glad to hear that you've moved on from sprite-flashes; chances are I've blammed a few of those. As for your newest work, I like it, but here are a few things you could throw in for the sequels: 1. Don't use the clock voice, 2. Have the character's mouth move when he talks, 3. Make the walking more "fluid" (it looks like he has a broomstick up his ass), 4. And finally, work a bit on the violence. (A shotgun does a bit more than leaving a red blotch on the zombies head.) With all of that being said, keep up the good work, and I will be waiting to see any additions you may be making.
da618 responds:
the people did move there mouth and when they didnt that ment they where thinking it not saying it aloud. thatnx for the review.
nice, but lacking
you're actual animation isn't bad, but the Hawking style speech makes seem like it's supposed to be as funny as it is serious. close so keep trying
AHHHHHH!
Zombies, Resident Evil references, and that stupid VOICE! Other than that, it was ok.
Alright
Not too bad. Animation was fairly good. You could've animated the shotgun shell coming out of the boomstick though when he cocked it...