Ok
Sorry nothing big nothing new... stupid nerds sitting at a table F that
Reviews for "The Manchester Ninja"
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Alright if your going to make a "cartoon" you should put more effort of actual animation. The ninja walking for the intro was decent. But you really should consider making your movements fluids and actually showing the 4 nerds in the woods getting hacked. Take your time and use lots of frames. Do not use jerky movement that will only hurt you. Poor background as well a D&D convention would have background ambience noises etc. The voice acting was "half-decent" though I have of course seen better I have seen undoubtably much much much worse. Just take your time with the next episode though if I were you I would scrap the whole project and start over. This is a bad start and its very confusing nor does it really introduce much. So please understand the low score. Though me being an alright level will give you a 5 seeing its early and I want you to atleast get a c+ for this.
wtf
well when the story of the ninja was being toldi was like this dudemay have talent, then once the girl/it started talkin at the table an rest of it...well....it just sad.
like you gave up, and why bother putting yourself in this?
i know the man moving h is arm up an down an who talked witha bubble was ment to be you.
simfocus responds:
That was not me all 4 of them are based on people I have met and make fun of.
Some people like it... Sorry you didnt.
My later movies will feature more of the Ninja. I never wrote a storyboard before or anything but the reviews are doing nothing but getting me to work harder on my next Manchester Ninja Movie.
This Was Pretty Damn Good
This was a really great flash. Not only do ninjas kick ass, but it was funny as hell too. Even the intro to the ninja was funny... XD
Great job, I hope you make more flash like this. Maybe a Manchester Ninja game where you go around assassinating D&D players? That would rawk.
simfocus responds:
Haha yes I am learning some programming but it's gonna be awhile before I can put something like that out.
That was interesting I guess.
and was the kid in the FILM shirt jerking it under the table...
simfocus responds:
You will just have to wonder.