niiice
dat wus a perdy good song, son. lol i dont kno why im talkin like dat haha but anyways good job.
Reviews for "[3nL] - Techburp"
Just made the 5 list.
You know it took me quite a while for me to get into the song. If i hadn't been doing something else at the same time it would have been a 4 and I would not have listened to the whole song. I'm glad I did, I think the full sound and good bass and melody did it well... try catch the attention better is my only advice. 5/5
3ndL3ss responds:
im glad you were doing something else at the time lol, cause i wouldnt want to get a lower score cause of 1 bit, im probs going to add some FX sounds in the intro so it catches the listeners attention a little more, but thanks, all the reviews here have been really helpful to me and ill be sure to use them in remaking this song, thanks for your review
[3nL]
Much better...
Yup I can hear the improvement...but now I found another problem (lol)...you're using pretty much the same synths in your works... could've changed em at least, not default. still nice work!
3ndL3ss responds:
hmm, ill be sure to use this review, just wished this criticism was said earlier lol cause i finished techburp already, but thanks for the review
[3nL]
Good.
The main synth line and melody in this song were great and catchy as well. The buildups were ok but you could have made them better with some more pads. The line you introduced in the beginning I think maybe should have come back into the song. It was pretty sick and could have helped in the buildups etc.
The drums were okay, but you need to vary them. Add more effects and fills as well. The drums got really repetitive but with a few different aspects, you could really make them shine through. Also, when you break it down, try changing the drum beat from a 4-on-the-floor maybe to something a little different. It'll give the feeling that the song has slowed down a tad. Anyways, basically more effects on the drums, variation, and fills (snare roll, etc - just don't use the snare roll over and over haha).
I also think you need a pad in here as well. You have a sidechained pad in there but you need some background noise when everything breaks down. Maybe a dark pad could work or something a little less busy than the traditional trance bad.
All in all, good job but this song could definitely use some more work. Keep it up!
~SinJim
3ndL3ss responds:
yeah, as i said in the authors comments this isnt my final version, im working on this song as i write this response lol, and your review has given me a lot of help, this is just the review i wanted to see lol, thanks for that. pads, ill use some pads and drum beats i was just working on haha =P, but thanks for your review, was really helpful and ill certainly take it into consideration!
hey do you mind sending me a PM telling where you think the pads would be good?? thanks
[3nL]