awesome job!
its really good! the beginning sounds like one of my projects im working on. i like the part in the middle, it sounds really good (2:11) you have quite a bit of noises to, which makes me just want to listen to it more and not just press the back button and not listen to it at all. nice job, keep it up!
5/5
10/10
keep it up!
this is the longest review ive ever done.
oh really, awesome if its a good thing, sorry if its not a good thing lol, im glad you see it that way and personally, 2:03 onwards is my favourite bit ^_^, yay for my song for having your longest comment yet XD haha
you reviews is appreciated ^_^
[3nL]
Good.
The main synth line and melody in this song were great and catchy as well. The buildups were ok but you could have made them better with some more pads. The line you introduced in the beginning I think maybe should have come back into the song. It was pretty sick and could have helped in the buildups etc.
The drums were okay, but you need to vary them. Add more effects and fills as well. The drums got really repetitive but with a few different aspects, you could really make them shine through. Also, when you break it down, try changing the drum beat from a 4-on-the-floor maybe to something a little different. It'll give the feeling that the song has slowed down a tad. Anyways, basically more effects on the drums, variation, and fills (snare roll, etc - just don't use the snare roll over and over haha).
I also think you need a pad in here as well. You have a sidechained pad in there but you need some background noise when everything breaks down. Maybe a dark pad could work or something a little less busy than the traditional trance bad.
All in all, good job but this song could definitely use some more work. Keep it up!
~SinJim
yeah, as i said in the authors comments this isnt my final version, im working on this song as i write this response lol, and your review has given me a lot of help, this is just the review i wanted to see lol, thanks for that. pads, ill use some pads and drum beats i was just working on haha =P, but thanks for your review, was really helpful and ill certainly take it into consideration!
hey do you mind sending me a PM telling where you think the pads would be good?? thanks
[3nL]
niiice
dat wus a perdy good song, son. lol i dont kno why im talkin like dat haha but anyways good job.
Dull retoned fart euphoria!
I woudn't call it DJ burping, but more like "dull retoned fart euphoria". The climax around the middle was great! And the tune was catchy, too. Something I noticed too: if you cjanged the ending a little, the song would loop in perfectly. But it's a song, not a loop. So yeah...
This song goes well with the DietSoda vizz. Try it yourself!
dietsoda vizz? whats that lol, and yeah he thought it was, but then i modified the sound in FL a bit so it didnt sound exactly like that, but a "dull retoned fart euphoria" works too haha
thanks for the review
[3nL]