I liked it but..
The rhythm wasn't that great. The lyrics didn't flow much.
I liked it but..
The rhythm wasn't that great. The lyrics didn't flow much.
I know, its my first song...EVAR!
nice song
too bad im not in it :( i mean nothing to you?
nevertheless, i enjoyed the lyrics, the vocals were solid and the tune was relaxing.
Your name is 4 syllables, it would take up like half of a line :P
why ??
You lost 1 point because this lowered my IQ and one point because i am not in it =[
Ouch, man, it shoulda raised your IQ, seeing as its already as low as it gets! OWNED...Hah, just playin
And your not in the reg lounge too often
Funny on the first listen.
The rhymes are reasonably well laid out and fairly funny.
I liked the background sounds. The main melody was kinda repetitive, but I loved the variance from the beats, scratching and extra fx like the strings.
There was some noise on the mic, but the whole thing still sounds aweome, in a homegrown way.
Ultimately, technical quality doesn't mean much here. It made me smile. made me chuckle a little when I first listened through.
Well done. Also, the fact that someone even made this... that's funny enough as a concept.
"Since then its grown
more and more
keeping up with it
is almost a chore"
Too true...
Oh, and 0 points docked for me not being in it. ;-)
Hah thanks :P.
This song wasn't exactly made to be good, because I couldn't make a good song if my life depended on it. It turned out to be ok, but it made people laugh, which was the point of making the song from the beginning.
Geez those extra 0 points really could of helped my review average!
this makes me cry