Not bad
But you have to stream the music! The file wouldn't be worth the wait (That is, if i didn't have fast DSL ^_~) But otherwise the animation was good.
Reviews for "skate boarding #1"
45288 responds:
damn u no what im gunna go download flash mx right now so i can make another and better skate boarding movie
Eh
didn't tickle my fancy. but it was a good try though. suggestions i'd make:
1) increase fps to make more fluidity in the animation
2) too much detail on the characters
3) you're using flash. it's basically a cartoon. you can make characters do anything in a cartoon. instead of a board slide or casper, etc, etc, bust out some crazy crap that you'd never be able to see in real life. Or just crazy crap that only one man (Rodney Mullen, aka god) can do, i.e. kickflip underflip to a rail. And have you seen Mullen's Tony Hawk 3 video where he goes from manual, to nose manual to sex change to pop shove-it sex change, and it goes on and on and on?
Bottom line: put more extreme stuff in there. Good try otherwise
....trying to place the band. Bad Religion?
mate i have to say it took ages to load
its a huge file and a short vid. kind stupid after you wait so long for it to load and then you get a few sequences. i would work on making a flowing scene e.g. a bit of continuous street skating. like a set of stairs followed by a long rail then some manual tricks on the flat. but good anyway.
ste! the chief!
"skateboarding" is one word
i like the graphics but none flowed together or looked real whatsoever , it was all fucked up tony hawks pro skater style like "the neck wrap spin" what the hell?
45288 responds:
ha ya i no neck warp spin. some body already what that was check it out cuz me to lazy to re write it again
well its not that good and its not that bad
ok bad things:
1. you tried to put too much detail in the skaters and just made it shit...
2. you pretty much only drew 1 or 2 pics for each trick
good:
1. you put effort in to make a full bodied skate movie wich takes probably takes about and hour to do atlest 2 tricks
2. you picked a good song that went well with sk8ing
3. its sk8ing (i love it)
so theres my 2 cents
you deserve a lovely 3/5
P.S. WTF is a neck wrap spin?????!!!!11!!11!1!!!1