Good
Would make nice passive music for a game. If it were for such a thing, it wouldn't need much more melody. If you want to go towards traditional techno would would need a few more melodies though. More melodies are always good =Þ. Just keep that in mind.
Actually, this is the second or third project I started in Fruity Loops, and the first legitimate song I made. And it's original purpose was to be for a game about robots, haha. The game idea fell through, and the short BG music became a full song, and officially started my techno adventure.