It's okay for a first attempt.
Your flash was nothing really new. Having Nintendo characters curse at each other in unrealistic setting is bland at best. Attrocious if you cannot even be bothered to have proper grammar such as periods and captialization. Work on these basics and they will take you a long way.
...Uhmm
ill give u a 4 on overall score cause at least u did something. Kinda funny... or not... next time... make it longer!
ive seen funnier things on the teletubbies
dude i think u should stop makin movies cuz that was just retarded......and never again say and unkind word about link.....link rox.....u suck
eh
i've seen better but that was...wel actually, that kinda stank. Oh well
didnt like it
didnt like it at all