excellently thought, poorly created
that was really nifty. artisticly, creatively especially. while it isn't entirely new, it isn't common, and it is not well done by many. you are an exception.
however, there were so many glaring issues with the flash production, especially the sound, that i really couldn't give it a full rating.
first off, if you want to view it smoothly you have to put it down to low quality, which makes the graphics look about 1/100th as good as they are intended to. as awesome as all those lins were, you may want to lessen the amount of active graphics that flash has to generate, either by lessening, or by (what i would recommend) converting the pictures to very high res pictures. it won't help the size, but it will improve the experience dramatically.
secondly, the sound. ouch. that was horrible. you need to find a better mic, and get a blow screen, or whatever they call those. you popped the mic so many times with those p sounds that i could barely hear what you were saying. also, the song at the end with the piano was nifty, but it wasn't a smooth loop at all. you may want to fix that however possible.
at the end, it cuts off abruptly, and goes to the start. it looks almost like that whole ending sequence with the girl and the gravestone was the next episode, incomplete, inserted on the end of the first. you need to fix that.
overall, great job, but go back and spend a little time to improve the flash itself. do us all a huge favor and continue with these. thank you for making newgrounds a better place.