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Reviews for "9 lives"

Great

Just one thing that I found funny.
Canon can't fire themselves alone, u need people to do it.

sepal responds:

yeah i know, it's a stupid mistake but i wanted it to look like the police was alone at his ship.

potential

this series has got alot of potential there is just a few things you need to work on though,you didn't properly introduce the charecter,all i saw was a guy walk out a door,and he looked like a cop so i assumed he was on the police boat and not hoffman,the sound loops were good but you didn't properly sync them with the animation,did you just let the loop start and finnish out by its self,thats the way its usually done but it finnished before the scene was over you should maybe have it continuasly play throughout the movie by putting it on a continuas loop,this will keep the viewer interested in parts like when the boat was just sailing and nothing was happening,these points aside you have got some serious potential,the art and animation was smooth and better than some other stuff on ng,i can tell your still learning flash and i would advise you not to go all out on making new episodes every month,instead take your time and try to learn new things,when rushing to meet a deadline you dont mess about with things and you just do what is needed,take your time mess about and try to perfect your style and learn some stuff,ill be looking out for more stuff by you,hope this review has been a help.

sepal responds:

the sound syncs where good in the .fla. but it wasnt good anymore in the. swf, so it wasn't on purpose

i make it lose one point beacause that:

There is no humor,but i still make it a 9 cause there AC/DC music in there,acdc=best rock group ever!

sepal responds:

well yeah that's what we thaught too! :)