pretty good
Im seriously missing a decent main melody stream, its there, but just too vague and monotone if you ask me.
Furthermore you could have threw in a heavier bassline, but thats my taste, so i wont rip u off on that.. :P
the bpm could have been a bit higher, however i dont know what atmosphere you were trying to achieve, maybe explain a little about that in this or your next song ;)
What you did do very good was keeping the variation up, so it kept my attention. Nothing too extraordinary for the rest of it, but overall a pretty good job :D
keep on working
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