Interesting genre.
The intro was pretty koo. Caught my attention pretty kool. The guitar sound was really mysterious. then at 1:05 or so the drums came andreally took the song away. very nice there. I agree that it does sound muddled, but in a good way.
Suggestions: The snare was a bit overpowering. it kinda blurted out everything else. Might wanted to turn it down a bit.
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