voted 4
OK song, but needs work.
I liked the feel of this song. Kind of jazzy really. I don't know why, but I got the jazz feeling for some reason.
The melody was interesting, although simple it gave the song some body. The bass is what really caught my ear. It was very dominant. A good thing in some cases, but I'm not too sure about this one. It seemed a little too dominant for the melody.
The percussion, work on that. I honestly didn't like it at all. The kick was wayyyy too strong. You need to EQ and master that, or either get a completely new one. The snaps were an interesting choice, I liked that.
You seemed to have overused the reverse cymbal as well as the crash itself. Especially towards the end.
Overall decent song. You are getting better, but you need to fine tune before you can progress.
Keep up the good work.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)