Not bad.
Too bad you can't turn up the volume without distorting it because I had to put my volume all the way up to hear it. Oh well, I heard it is all that really matters and you do say to turn up the volume in your author comments. This gets very repetative, so maybe some variation here and there would help your score.
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Perpetual tune
I quite like the way that this tune seems to carry on. It's got the up and down of a tune that is having a bit of a change of beat and tempo, but it doesseem to keep giving itself nice impetus.
The only way that I'd improve this is to make it into a perpetual loop, which would greatly improve this aspect of the tune. Losing 5-10 seconds off each end of the tune could change it quite a bit though, so be warned.
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Lacking
It sounds to be lacking quit a lot in terms of beat, I think it could do with a little more, especilly in terms of the backing here, it doesn't really sound like you have a whole lot in this. What is here though does sound good, which is nice to hear and it all seems to come together pretty well, although on a whole, it is certainly quiet, so make it a little louder maybe.
Anyway, other than adding more backing and making it a bit louder, it is pretty good, the length is decent and the ending is also pretty good, though I would consider working on the opening, it doesn't quite sound all that good, but keep working at it.
3/5
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The track sounds quite good, but it's missing a part that really stands out here.
The parts you have here fit very well together and it's nice listening to this song. But I wish something more would happen here. A brigther main melody would be good. The whole track seems to be quite "dark" and deep, so a slightly higher main melody would sound quite well, I think.
Also, the ending is so abrupt, so it might be nice to loop this song, as Coop already suggested in his review.
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Not badddddd
Its a good track seems to lack a certain something though, it needs to be filled out more, an extra beat or melody in there wouldnt ruin the song at all ya know. :P
I thought it did get a bit repetitive, though. Adding another melody to this probably wouldn't hurt, just to mix things up a bit.
Its a pretty good track though overall its got a cool beat to it, something i can dance to!
*Dances*
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Yeah I know exactly what I need to improve now; everybody's telling me to add a melody layer to it! But thanks for the review! (Yay, I made you dance ^^)