This was alright
Pretty good for a beginner. i liked it...a little. Keep trying and dont give up...you'll get better (^_^)
This was alright
Pretty good for a beginner. i liked it...a little. Keep trying and dont give up...you'll get better (^_^)
Has potential
The choreography was great. The only problems I saw were that the sprites were small, and it was short. But hey, it was a lot better then HAcoreRD
Hmm
Pretty good, for your first time. Please do something about the spelling, though. Run everything through spell check. When you're doing a serious movie like this, all those misspellings really take you out of the moment. And I think it's better if the text just went on its own and you didn't have to click to continue. Hope you do very well on part 2.
Not Bad
Considering it was your first flash job, It wasn't bad. It was on the short side, and it also had several TIPOS. Other than that, It was cool.
Magus Rocks!!!!!
You lie - this cant be your first flash!!!
Bloody brilliant work.
Im finding it a lil hard to find something to tell you to help you improve....hmmmm.
Longers a must - mainly because its just so good
Cant wait 2 see more from you.
Good work
-=Eskimo Dan=-