One word : Spellcheck
You need to check your spelling and grammar when you are writing the intro to the story. Some of what you said came off as just plain jibberish.
Reviews for "River City Ransom :S.W."
work on it more...
needs some good background music...and also the animations where too choppy
the-dukester responds:
You know, I want to, but I still haven't figured this Flash make. Its called Seltco flash 4. I can put music in the back, but have to be in NPC format.
Not too bad
But i've seen better, there was too much text and the way the button keep moving around was frustrating and anyway buttons are annoying. The movement was a lil jerky, and the sound wasn't always in sync. Other than that this was a pretty good movie.
the-dukester responds:
A Flash need's a good story, and it didn't really hurt to Read.