It was alright
Theres a few things that need work
But first i really like the melody in this it very catchy and very ravish,iv all ways had a thing for ravish melodys so you got the melody down good and good synths to go with.
Its just the only thing that really like me down is repeating the melody through out the whole track and the percussion,the kick didnt really go well with it,it needs to be about harder to be honest and you dont need to you use the crash so much cause it puts me under the impression that your taking the track some where different where it didnt go.
Good work anyways keep it up you'll get better at fl i mean its kinda of a complex program but i learnt everything my self on my own on fl and check out where my music is.
So just stick at it and one day you will find you self making something you never thought possibl.
Peace