beginning = amateur.
or perhaps it isn't, but it sure sounds very amateur. sparked a fragment of my interest when the beat kicked in. sounds somewhat like aphex twin and i'm not a huge fan.
-consistent and repetitive (not a bad thing, you used the two elements wisely).
you have potential my friend, as i could hear very professional sounds. even
though i can make a melody, that's something i lack.
i'd play around with the filters and some other knobs with that low short synth in the beginning.
good work though.