A bit overdone, but promising
Too dramatic for an intro. I need to know something about what's going on before I'm disturbed by an IM. The animation is just too serious at this point. I look forward to future episodes. Good start.
Reviews for "Desolation Episode 1"
Real Potential
I know this has it's origin in 2004, but perhaps you'll read this eventually. You've got such talent here! It's a little slow and you don't deliver anything, a place like NG demands something happen - on a personal website a cliffhanger like that can stand up, but not in a 'everything for itself' portal like this. So you need to have had something happen, like just sit on it a bit longer and have done that next segment, then leave it on the 2nd cliffhanger.
Looks like you're a programmer too - if you've lost sight of flash these last years, have a think about coming back to it as a hobby - this shows real promise, kinda stink to see it not developed.
Most series go unloved until there's actually 3-4 behind them, so you've just got to have some perserverance getting it off the ground.