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Reviews for "lll_Deception Part 1_lll"

he should kill himself

with a gun

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks for the review, I will read all my reviews until a certain date, and I shall decide what is the better solution.
Alex

Nice

He should go on a wild killing spree, brutally smiting all the 45 dwarves that you cant see, but who stands behind him

alexsmolik responds:

Wild killing spree huh ?
I'm really looking forward to make a GORE sequel. Hehehe.
Thanks for the review.
Alex

Nice

LOL nice very good i liked it please make more thanks again for makeing the movie

alexsmolik responds:

Haha, thanks a lot man !
And yeah, that's the first episode, I hope you started off with that one :)
Thanks for the review.
Alex

RAMPAGE!!!

He should set traps for them and use their bodies for creating monsters.

alexsmolik responds:

lol, I'm glad you liked it, too bad the episodes 2 has already been made, along with number 3! That being said, your idea sounds like a whole sci-fi zombie thing ! :)
Thanks for the review.
Alex

Nice.

As I said before, your graphics get better by the time. Nice choice on the theme, here, aswell.

On one moment, you made the little dude run, and played a bit of music there. I don't even think that lasted two seconds. Try to avoid that in the future, it looks kind of... Well, silly. Either make the scene long enough to play the music, or leave it out.

Also, waaaay too short. Make it longer. Really.

As for the second episode, he could be down, and depressed. Eventually, maybe make it so that the girl finds out he loved her, and laughs at him for that. Then, you could bring the violence in, ex.: suicide, massacre, etc.

I'm looking forward to the second episode.

alexsmolik responds:

First of all, thanks for the compliments. You didn't like the part where he runs ? Oh well ... I thought it was funny lol.
I think the second episode will be much much gore and filled with violence, that's the way I want it to be hehe. But I'll let you people decide though.
Thanks for the review
Alex