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Reviews for "Unfinished Story (original)"

A review hot out of the oven

The intro was pretty kool. The ahhh in the background added to the atmosphere quite nicely. Very nice solid beats. I liked how you kinda switched around from genre to genre. I really think this song isn't too bad. Good job man

Suggestions: I think this song could be a bit more refined. Balance some volume levels. add some effects and stuff like that. Then it would be finished.

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

ill give it a check on the levels, they might need some more equalization work , saddly ive been short of time but ill give it a shot, on the effects part, what do u suggest? like sweeps and stuff like that?

Does not feel unfinished.

Interesting track you have various genres of music ,none of which is the same. So its fun guessing, what is techno dance etc.

The actual track is good the diffrent variety of music on offer is impressive. The start is good then later, around 2 minutes its changes to more music. The genre i cant work out but all together, its cool. I think the beats are nice a good track ,which has a cool ending the clapping is nice.

The tune is a little boring a times with the drums beating ,and it takes a while to get going, but on the whole its a nice mix.

Overeal nice track

genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

at the begining i didnt know if mixing the two types of melodies would work, because the first minute its soemthing completely diff from the rest of the song but i said what the hell its an experiment trow it all in lol, so it was all experimenting, and im considering on making some other song with this arrangement maybe something good might come out of it hehehe
thansk again for reviewing :D