Reviews for Unfinished Story (original)

[AnalPenguinFarming]

Not as bad as you think...

It definitely wasn't as sloppy as you made it out to be in your Author's comments. I actually found it to be quite impressive. I liked the way it was a bunch of sounds mixed up because that means one thing for the song - it isn't repetitive. Once you try to aim for a certain beat that builds up throughout a song, you always have to worry about boring the person listening. This song you didn't have that to worry about at all. In fact this at no point got too repetitive. However there was a buildup at one point, but in the end it turned out great! Even the ending, though it sounded different from the rest of the song, fit in great! Nice work!

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

you are completely right, i guess i killed it on my comment T_T, well i was kidna hyper and since it was something experimental .... im glad u actually liked it hehe the ending still im not quite convinced with it, i did another version with an alternate ending to this one, i guess ill post it to see what you think about it . thanks for reviewing it :D

im glad its not repetitive hehe:D

[phantomlassuk]

Does not feel unfinished.

Interesting track you have various genres of music ,none of which is the same. So its fun guessing, what is techno dance etc.

The actual track is good the diffrent variety of music on offer is impressive. The start is good then later, around 2 minutes its changes to more music. The genre i cant work out but all together, its cool. I think the beats are nice a good track ,which has a cool ending the clapping is nice.

The tune is a little boring a times with the drums beating ,and it takes a while to get going, but on the whole its a nice mix.

Overeal nice track

genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

at the begining i didnt know if mixing the two types of melodies would work, because the first minute its soemthing completely diff from the rest of the song but i said what the hell its an experiment trow it all in lol, so it was all experimenting, and im considering on making some other song with this arrangement maybe something good might come out of it hehehe
thansk again for reviewing :D