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Reviews for "Stick Shorts"

Predictable humour but not to bad

Could have thought of some new ideas but what you did you did quite well

Graphics - Drawings arent to bad and animation seems to be quite well done

Sound - I actually quite liked the soundtrack and sound effects espcially the screaming

Style
Story - Predicable shorts dont make the best story but hey its better than a lot of other flash movies and easy to follow
Structure - Menus and navigation throughout the flash is all very well done you get quite a lot for the file size although even tho its no big deal i was a little confused that 3 of the shorts went bak to main menu which is good and then 1 you had to press a button just a little weird

Humour - sadly this bit ruins the flash as its so predictable its boring for instance crossing the road ... whod had guessed a car would come maybe if you over eggedurate the humour it would have been better like when he crossed the road 7 cars a bus an elepahant a beansprout and a rolling sumo with a clown running on top of him and a roling penny or sumthing like that what you did was a tad to simple

Overall I realise i need to get out more as I am becoming quite insane :(

Also with a little more thought on content your flash could be really good the graphics etc are fine

sktslime responds:

thx, i like your idea about what hits em in the road.

good start

keep working biatch

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it was bad, but it could have been worse. at least you use color. good job.

The Point Being...

Although the animations weren't too bad i honestly failed to see the point in that movie. maybe that is the point. having no point. Good work but i think you need a killer idea to show your potential bro.

Bleh

Predictable and stupid. At least you have a distinctive style. A distincitive style of drawing badly.