not 2 good man
i guess u have an OK concept, like resisdent evil, but its just not working. Practice a bit, or try a diffrent style. Maybe try a fresh idea.
Reviews for "Blood Shot Ep 2"
You need LOTS of work.
Wow, you suck more then my sticks. You've got animating and drawings down, now all you need is good plot and action scenes. Get something original. Not everyone is perfect, so keep practicing.
work on it
if all the speech if going to be written, the least you could do is make their mouths move! I was laughing at how they were managing to have a conversation by staring at eachother. This could be pretty good if it had a point to it.. before you continue you should really develop the idea more, because this wasnt much of an episode. Also, record some voice parts. Flash silent movies like this suck.
stesk8 responds:
I have made the mouths move now, Check it out
-ste-
It was...........-ok-
It was short, and not 2 entertaining actually. Exesive violence my arse.
meh
pretty much just as boring as the original one, but this one had some cool audio in it though.