Reviews for The lost arena. Part 1

[plinkin]

It works

The graphics were pretty bad but everything seemed to be working correctly.

The previous poster was right,you grammar and spelling are on the low end. I don't know where Gaurach is, and don't want to be rude, but if English isn't your first language then you didn't do all that bad. Find someone who can check it for you since it's really annoying to try and plow your way through garbled text. Far be it from me to put someone down when I don't speak a second language myself...heh, or not well enough to claim that I do.

[Tiwaz]

right...

ok first off use a spellchecker...you've got so many typo's in this game it makes my brain want to stop working...beyond that the graphics are pretty lame...the game itself is decent though i dont really see the need to have to type out the spells names, that just seems like a dating sim thing that you've tried to bring to an RPG. work on the graphics and perhaps make it so you dont respawn at the same place every time (perhaps you should spawn wherever you last where...if i go into the store shouldnt i leave the store? yet somehow im magically teleported to the fish store...yeah...work on the graphics and the spawnpoints and this could be a very fun game. superheal made the last fight almost pointless as i could accumulate over 100 hp's. overall this is not a bad game it just needs to be prettied up, and some of the kinks ironed out.

trybyhitman responds:

Yes. The spawns are bad. And the rest of the things are kinda bad too. I'll work on that. Thanks.