awsome!!!!!so very awsome
dude this is the greatest thing i have ever seen! if you were trying to get the depressed vibe going you did it!!!!!! and might i say you did it perfectly! so yes all i want to say is congrats great movie
Reviews for "My Life Of Yours"
Holy Crap
Thats awsome you really need to finish it, because that is very moving and it sent chills over my body.
Puzzlerf responds:
thanx
that was awesome
you have some talent, keep up the good work. does he die at the end? or is there like a sequel? u should make a part like when hes writting the letter where he gets flashbacks of kissing that other girl or whatever. or was he telling the truth? wait did he or didnt he cheat anyway um..ya..?
Puzzlerf responds:
watch threw the white parts and u can see the ending. thats not a bad idia, flash backs to the girl who kissed him, he didnt lie or cheat on his gf.
Dude...amazing
Dude...this was so good...i loved every bit of it.......i got so much from it...i hope to see so much more from you....Good job..
here is an idea to finish your work....
puzzlerf,
from what i saw it seems like your character is going to try to jump off of something tall like that building. but he has some unresolved issues with a girl. perhaps you can have him write a song for her.
then you can have him record the lyrics. then you can have him record playing his guitar. and then have him mix the two together. perhaps you can have him go to a mixing studio and do it.
there might be some interesting potential to this if someone helps him mix the lyrics and guitar together. perhaps the guy will try to intervene. or perhaps the guy leaves and lets the guy finish his work on his own.
whatever happens with this the overall unifying point is this. the guy is going to take his finished work to his ex. then he will probably leave and go kill himself. perhaps you can have the ex try to look for him.
BUT he should not tell her where he is going. otherwise your ending will not make sense or it will be the cliche girl tries to save guy and fails. which consequentially leads to the girl falling onto her knees and crying...
sincerely,
mysticcrow
Puzzlerf responds:
have to say i apreciat the thought put into it, and its a great idia, but its not really what i'm goign for, its suposed to be more focused around the problems in his life and how he cant bear it anymore, and how its just shit. i'm tryign to get the feeling of being deprresed acrossed.