Enjoyable!
Bad:
Funky break in beginning part
Too repetitive before first transition
Could use more reworking than just the beat at the beginning
Just a bit too repetitive over all...
Good:
Love the idea
Good basis
Love the really tech style in middle
Alot of potential!
Too have just been bored this was really good though!!!
I really enjoyed it :D
Thanks for submitting it!
Suggestion
Fluctuate your bass. Imagine your self getting sucked in and out of some intense pumping mechanism. Make the bass like that.
It's OK
Keep it up.
Hmm...interesting.
I'll say this was a good effort. For being bored, this is certainly not a bad creation. I rather enjoyed it.
To be honest, though, it got old after a while. You might want to fluctuate your percussion a little so that it's not so constant. Also, adding a little more bass wouldn't hurt.
Hope this helps.
---Thomas-Moffitt Stage
auch
hmmm, u could've blended in some other effects and maybe made the drums more exciting? cause this was way to boring.
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