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Reviews for "Nav - Deathwish [Full Ver.]"

Kick's not loud enough :(

good:
- really cool reese
- atmospheric pads with fun chords

bad:
- hat and kick are too soft
- goes nowhere

:/

fived though

Nav responds:

Haha, there are no chords. I just sampled a bunch of pads, then timestretched them.

Yeah, I canceled this song anyways, so I wasn't expecting people to care. Thanks for the review! :)

Great man

Nice li'l roller you have here, i would just like some more percussion in between the snare and kick, to add some depth and to fatten the drums up. Great snare, btw.
I really want to know the process of the reece there. what kind of filters and stuff did you put on? idk, i would just like to know just so i could experiment. ill talk to you on aim or something ;]
cheers m8, gj on the track
zack

Nav responds:

Sure man, I'll talk to you on AIM! :)

Split Personality !?

Mate, the beginning is fantastic, really gets you in a calm state of mind, but the thin little sine you bring in ruins the amazing sfx in my opinion. You should get rid of it, and use a scary piano instead, and when the beat comes in keep the fx going with the two, because when the beat comes in and the SFX fade, your track loses its fullness. You can let it fade at the break, but not this early! As the bass comes in, my point is strengthened, imagine what that bass would sound like with that SFX? It's a very nice bass, and I like the directness of the percs. The little pad in the background is very good also, keeps it driving.

Heres what you should do :

- Keep the SFX throughout with the bass, and then break with a pad and piano which is haunting.
- Maybe add one more loop to give the track a little more drive.
- Maybe you could bring the bass in after 17 bars (Yes that quick)
- GET RID of that sine at the start, it's really annoying and very unprofessional.

Otherwise, this is downloaded and well enjoyed.

Pulstate.

Nav responds:

Ok, I will take your advice. See, I was using timestretching pads here, so I didn't know what I would get. I'll be sure to take it out!

I'm see what I can do about bringing the bass in the intro. Thanks for the review! :D