ill be honest and
tell you i wasn't a fan of your stuff at all really, but listening to this i'm getting down to it, but i really like your instrument choice. i can see you use FL but where do you get the swooshing sfx? it adds a cool effect. one thing this song lacks is uniqueness. the melody choice just doesn't stick with me. its more the choice of instruments, like i said, and the way you started out the song... (i think you should have continued in that direction btw) ... that hooked me.
great job nonetheless obviously. 5/5
if you'd care to, i have a new song i submitted last week. it'd mean a lot if you took a listen. thanks and keep these songs comin'
-crepth