Good Idea but
Not bad, but It needs some work.
Reviews for "The Gametrix 1.1"
Nice...
It's one of the good matrix parodies I've seen... good job. The graphics and voice acting could be improved, but they are ok. I suggest you put optional subtitles, because the voices aren't always easy to understand. The length of the movie is good too.
I hope you finish part 2 soon !
i Like the idea
cool
From one Artist to Another...
I had a hard time to pick between a 6 and 7... meh, i guess i just give u a 7, i'll tell you why.
First off, ( claps )... good stuff in a time limit of... what, 5 months? geesh, ok. Pablo, listen to me, i know you have GREAT potential, sadly, this isn't your best work, i know that for a fact, you can make more decent stuff then this in like... 2 months! like my Evanson did! ( by the way, good job with the close excellent score, but not enuf sadly ).
Basically all i'm trying to say in this review is that your movies are great, but i'm going to be repeating some of the stuff other viewers would basically say. Your ideas have great potential, heck, you create some of the most origional masterpieces! Just dont try to go overboard with the jokes. I mean, its true that at some points you tried WAY too hard to be funny.... ( shakes head ), not good. Improve yourself for the next episode though dude, i mean. Dont give up, you have so much potential, the only thing u need to work on is your graphics, and maybe your scripts. Cut out the scenes that dont make any sense, and start fresh... hehe, i kinda sound like my english teacher, Flash making is just like writing an essay in a way, you gotta state a main point and stick to it. And keep puting in those fancy points which add extra spice to the movie. I'm not trying to offend u or anything dude, i'm just saying this because i want you to excel badly!!! you want to get into film-making/production, dont you? If you are, then follow my lead, and let me help you, because i'm already on my path, and i'm well on my way to becoming an animator like any talented artist on newgrounds would. Just take people's advice, and follow them, fix your work, and you got yourself some GOLD! Pablo, i've known you for 7+ years, i hope you enjoyed my gift of flash to you, use it wisely, and lets teach these people on newgrounds what exactly WE can do together! eh? ;-)
Thanks Buddy, i'm always there to help, remember to focus on your work, and work fast! But importantly, dont rush either! :-)
Peace out dude! gotta run!
~Dan
Funny Stuff!
Very funny stuff! The Mario/Smith segment was great, as was the meetup with Kirby/Morpheus. I'd have to say the little computer chat was the best though.
There were a few slow points, but it had enough laughs to keep me interested. Good work. ^o^