Great job for a first timer.
Your flash is a lot better than the other "first flashes" on this site.
Reviews for "Mario o mega First part"
not too shabby
Not bad at all, has a few pace problems though. could be faster in most places, but there were a few spots where I couldn't catch all the dialogue. again, not bad, now just tweak it.
oh man
you got my five
DarkAaron19 responds:
hurray!! :)
Decent...
Could of been better the fighting could of been better but overall it was pretty good.
alright
i liked it and i cant wait till part 2.