Keep it comin' dude!
Ok, i'm not going to qoute about the graphics, just touch up on them and make'em look nice for the nice people of newgrounds... right? k.
Hmm, as far as plot goes, i'm amazed. Keep that good flash coming dude, i love your ideas, really. Although i found the graphics from "Addressing the Nation" alot better then some of the slides from this movie that will be out soon. But i know for a fact that you put ALOT of work into this movie, and generally i should congratulate you on the hard strives you were actually able to pull off for this creative art piece. The only thing i'm advising you from here on until your release, is that you FIX UP your scenes, and maybe some parts of the body. I've generally noticed ( and this is my artist side talking, i'm not trying to be mean or anything ) that you spend way too much time on eye or body graphics, and u dont spend enough time on some of the scenes, or proper character looks. I mean, lets be serious here, the one scene with the clouds and that building, i think u took about.... what.... 2 minutes to do that? and a couple of simple motion tweens to fill in about 5-10 seconds of the movie, not good. I'm generally very cautious around everything, and i want u to try really hard when your making a movie dude, every little bit counts, i got you into flash for a reason ;-).
Anyway, i'm blabbing on now, you do the math, eat your vitamins, and hope that the nice people on newgrounds will tip their hat to you in respect. Alrighty, peace out~, tell me how the movie will come out near the future. And look for a nice surprise of EVANSON 2 in the near future.
-Dan