Interesting
Definitely a slower, almost a more ambiant trance mix I've heard. Trying to avoid biasim due to my being an Iraqi War vet myself, and the quotes you chose were very nicely mixed in there. Was anticipating a more dramatic finish after the the second "Freedom comes at a cost," the build for it was there, but then it backed off almost immediately to continue as the rest of the song did making the ending a tad lacking in dynamic in my opinion.
Solid beat and rhythm from start to finish, good message and use of voice clips, consistant ending- would be a 10, but I think that ending needs a bit more punch or something to drive it all home and stand out from the rest of the song. The slower, backed off piano for the voice clips was right on though- wouldn't change anything in that area.
Respect brudda, you've got talent... I just disagree with the ending.